large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company.
In your letter,
describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to provide some feedback on your noble cause as an aware resident of the area and in the capacity of a former spending manager for Tata Motors.
Talking about funding the sports team, I believe this can be used in many ways. We can hire a well-reputed coach for the local cricket team who can set up the right culture. We can also provide high-quality equipment like cricket kits and high-speed cameras to the team which will help enhance their performance.
There are also some advantages of sponsoring the open-air concerts. This will create temporary employment for the locals which may ultimately prove to be a push for them to start their career in the same field. Secondly, locals will be delighted to attend such concerts as it will give them a break from their monotonous life for which if they would have to pay for, would never attend.
In my opinion, however, it will be wiser to sponsor the children’s cricket team especially as the money will support them for two years. This will be for the betterment of these athletes which will ultimately elevate the reputation of the town with their good performance in the coming future.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully
Rishi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ak from their monotonous life for which if they would have to pay for, would never...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83796296296 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58288111667 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5723809439 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272772302831 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10649658345 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556827051827 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155477632464 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408835546429 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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