In many Countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of Crime? How can we deal with those causes?
We are seeing a rapid growth in number of felonies being committed worldwide. This essay will discuss main causes of crime including rise in unemployment and over-ambitious nature of people. This essay will also discuss how these causes can be dealt with two main effects namely better government policies and promoting good behavior affecting the society.
To begin with, the first major cause resulting in crime is unemployment. As a result of this many people become unsuccessful to manage their expenses and often choose immoral path to get money. For example, during great depression when many US citizens lost their jobs, country observed linear increase in crime cases. Another major reason for this is greedy nature of young generation. These people are not satisfied with what they have but try to achieve every luxury that they can. Naturally having limited income not satisfying their needs, they often plan for robbery, kidnapping or other brutal crimes. Thus, these two reasons are major contributors behind increase in crimes.
Nevertheless, the crime rate has to be controlled. One possible way for this is having greater efforts from the government. Government can design better social security schemes or provide career guidance to the unemployed people. For instance, through government policies they can start some skill build programs for free for every citizen using initial period of social security benefits. Second useful solution could be by promoting ideal behavior to every citizens. To illustrate, schools can arrange special sessions that can showcase good practice followed by some famous personalities to climb the ladder of success without opting for any cynical path.
In conclusion, it is an indisputable fact that alarming growth in crime rate is dangerous. This essay discussed two main causes of this namely increase in unemployment and over ambitious nature of people. This essay also reviewed two possible solutions including improved governments policies and endorsing good behavior for the citizens of the country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, nevertheless, second, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.440625 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65030769145 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8759994465 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6315789474 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182025326709 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601721519975 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641985851069 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118752017319 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053648228358 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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