In the past most people worked for small businesses while more people now work for large businesses What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses

Essay topics:

In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?

In the past few decades, we are seeing more and more conglomerates replacing the small businesses, thanks to capitalism! Accordingly, number of people employed in these big businesses is exponentially increasing. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of working for these businesses.
There are many advantages to working in large companies. Firstly, jobs in these companies are relatively steady. Since the big companies have an established position compared to any small business, they do not go through high attrition cycles unless a catastrophe occurs. For example, when the COVID-19 pandemic struck the world, many small businesses caught completely shut, but big businesses are able to weather the storm with fewer difficulties. Another advantage of large organizations is that they have competitively higher salaries and other benefits. These companies have types and agreements with medical providers which incentivizes these benefits. On top of them, companies have many perks included for their team members. For instance, an employee of the Hilton corporation can benefit from subsidized medical benefits and also can take advantage of employee-only pricing. Thus, working for such large companies is preferred by many people.
On the other hand, it also comes with some demerits. It is observed that people working for big companies have lower job satisfaction. This is because the jobs are limited to one particular field and the opportunity for growth is decimated to the specific department. In an IT company, for example, the employee is restricted from doing the same job every day with mostly a vertical growth opportunity in an elongated time period. One more disadvantage of working for big companies is a more stressful life. Because of the higher compression in the big companies their employees clock in longer working hours. In small businesses, however, people often contribute to diverse fields and don’t have high mental pressure.
In conclusion, the current trend suggests the jobs in big companies replacing the traditional local businesses is progressively increasing. As we discussed in the essay there are some obvious benefits of this change but they certainly come with some disadvantages.

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Average: 8.2 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49855072464 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01499995733 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8127835226 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.85 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340845159839 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106910159936 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922736658035 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196224598516 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087272013512 0.056905535591 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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