You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or the company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
Describe the problem with the equipment
Explain how this problem is affecting your work
Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
The reason I am writing to you is the poor quality of a computer monitor, which I bought in your store two weeks ago. After only using it for a week, problems started to appear.
The issue with the monitor is that the stand is very loose and with minor touch, it has a risk of falling. The second and major issue is that the color panel is blurred and I can’t see part of the screen because of this. I was very surprised to discover that many problems in a quite expensive model.
This is badly affecting my work as I am not able to use the monitor anymore. I have to use my laptop the entire time and because of the smaller and single screen of the laptop, I end up with pain in my eyes every evening. Additionally, I have to constantly toggle between my working tabs which is slowing down my speed.
As a solution, I want to get this monitor to be replaced by a new one. I would like to have someone pick it up from my home as my work schedule is quite busy. If you don’t have the same model available, I would request a refund in the full amount I paid as this is available in other stores.
I hope to hear soon from you.
Yours faithfully,
ABC
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.10822510823 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25484201506 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580086580087 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2163036106 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234542497017 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771413296594 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033768507355 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117922519291 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03952354243 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.