last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter1) thank them for the photos and for the holiday.2) explain why you didn't write e

Dear Sunny and Weber,

I anticipate that you both are doing very well. Firstly I would like to thank you guys for such an unforgettable and fantastic trip. I had my best vacation in Seychelles and did really loved your company. I can't thank you enough for the hospitality and your time with me. I've just received your email with all photos of the trip and believe me how amazing photographer Sunny is. I mean they are simply stunning and advice Sunny to start the photography profession. I am sure she will be an eminent photographer.

Furthermore, I am really sorry for not writing back to you earlier as I was passing through the worst time when I left for my home. My luggage was erroneously sent to other location instead of Hyderabad and I had to wait 24 hours to get it back. The ordeal did not finish yet when I reached home, I had to spend without the basic requirement of electricity as my landlord forgot to pay the bills and hence not connected to the internet.

Anyway, I am settled now and I would like you guys to visit Hyderabad sometime next month. I will be free then and I'll plan an itinerary. There are absolutely some exquisite places to visit here.

Hoping to see you momentarily.

Lots of love,
James.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...es and did really loved your company. I cant thank you enough for the hospitality an...
^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... the hospitality and your time with me. Ive just received your email with all photo...
^^^
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ime next month. I will be free then and Ill plan an itinerary. There are absolutely...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, really, so, then, well, i mean

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54017857143 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62648387967 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4453321323 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268247121128 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078918182041 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723099870307 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116713834684 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847270887848 0.0580467560999 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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