Letter: your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council.
in your letter
- give details of how you and your friends or family use the center
- explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
- describe the possible effects on local people if the center is closes.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to the council`s decision of closing the sports center where is in the city due to saving its running fund.
The center is being utilized not only by youth who in our age, but also by the senior people in all families. When the center is opened to public, it seduces many friends of mine to practice their favorite sports regularly at the center. However, the center is crowded in the weekends, families are also being gathered for spending their free time.
Currently, people become very stressed from the work load and fast pace of life; therefore, sports are essential part of life to release such mental pain. Practicing sports and hobbies during the weekends allow people to be more energetic for the next week. Without these kinds of centers will reflect into a deterioration in individual personality and community development.
Sports secure acceptable health level for people; thus, detrimental effects may be measured if such sports centers closed. The rate of obesity will be increased among people due to this shutdown. The socialization between people will be lost, and no union will be presented between each other.
I look forward to the decision being reevaluated by management.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...agement. Yours faithfully, Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17619047619 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65193635669 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9987461201 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5833333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170258904363 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638023160924 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563770063103 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852264564805 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627302435603 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.