A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:
◾Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about
◾Explain why they would be of interest to the students
◾Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to request you to allow me few minutes on the international day, as I want to deliver the speech on one of the vulnerable topic.
I want to give the presentation on the tradition, culture, cuisine and attires on the people of my native place. International media has deteriorated the image of my country in past few years and portrayed it in the negative ways in the front of the whole world. So this speech will give my chance to though the clear light on positive aspects of my nation.
Most of the students of the colleges are of political science, so it will be interesting topic for them and help them to understand numerous global issues in much better way. Apart from this, my points will definitely be able to catch the attention of the audience because of the diversity of the topics covered.
I request you to please provide the projector and the sound system as I want to show the small video on few issues and displayed some pictures on the screen.
Hope you will consider my request.
Yours faithfully,
Maninder Virk
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66492146597 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62258202161 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3192278494 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13356568928 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548319136433 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355518839841 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731644838991 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392633548283 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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