A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:
Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about
Explain why would they be of interest to the students
Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk
Dear Mr. Thompson,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in delivering a speech on international day organized by your esteemed education center.
To begin with, I would love to tell the students about the uniqueness of my country. Furthermore, I am willing to throw some light on sports, culture and languages. I have plethora of data to speak on verities of spices and food consumed in India. Besides, politics can never remain untouched.
On top of it, I understand that young generation have some negative thought process about the politics of my country that has been conveyed through media. I have authentic data to support the positive aspects of politics of our country. I am sure children will be impressed to listen to it.
I have a request to arrange the projector as I am going to share few data and pictures that is not available on television. Also, sound system would be of great help in conveying whatever has been played on.
I hope you will accept my request, thanking you in advance.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Urvashi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n will be impressed to listen to it. I have a request to arrange the projector...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, look, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89839572193 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74504016422 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652406417112 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9410808671 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4615384615 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221099293578 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066107906832 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505615309977 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100710426068 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032975738409 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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