In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
Do you agree or disagree?
It has often been argued that in some countries people are more inclined towards readymade food leading to health disorder. To avoid citizens, consuming unhealthy diet, it has now became obligatory to charge more tariff on readymade food items. To be very precise, I strongly agree with this opinion and think whatever we eat leads to our good or bad health. Government levying tax on eatables as in case of alcohol and tobacco will restrict us to eat food like breads and buns.
To begin with, it has commonly been noticed that due to busy lifestyle, family has opted to eat junk food as it does not take more time to cook. Not only elders are giving the priority to this food but also kids love to eat burgers and pizzas. As a result of it, children are becoming obese at very young age. Unknowingly, when adults eat food like noodles, it does not get digested easily and leads to stomach ailment. For example, a study done in oxford university states that 50%youngsters of United States of America are suffering from obesity in comparison to Indian teenagers. Therefore, government should not take second thought for those food items that makes people sick instead a lucrative amount should be charged.
Furthermore, it has been seen that those who were in early eighties were not as sick as people today. With the advancement of technology, we are moving to more developed stage, unfortunately neglecting what our food platter constitute of. Also, it is visible that people consume beer and tobacco in balanced proportion as it costs more. The tax which government received from citizens gets utilized in treatment of lung damage after smoking. For instance, United Kingdom has a strategy to use the amount of taxes earned by selling cigarette for treatment of lungs ailment. Moreover, there is a huge tax on beer and people think twice to buy it resulting in proportionate consumption. Thus, by inculcating tax on ready to eat food will keep people away from these bad habit.
To recapitulate, I would rather say, eating favorite food to satisfy tongue craving is good till the time it is not hampering the health. So it is vital for the government to come up with tax scheme on certain food items to keep country healthy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83072916667 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5874030758 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.0594763903 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.6315789474 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308176268978 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887257424144 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044220912391 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191275858586 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125351105373 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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