A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:
Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about
Explain why would they be of interest to the students
Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk
Dear Mr. Mathieu Couvert,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in speaking about my country on the international day event organized by our college.
My country has a very unique culture; therefore, I would like to share a lot of information related to the food, clothes, sports and our local language. Moreover, I will talk about the positive contributions to the world that people from my country have made in the last few decades.
In the last few years, my country was portrayed negatively in the western media. Most of the students at our college study international politics; therefore, I think it will be very interesting for them to know the positive aspects of my country. This information is often not available through television programs.
I will really appreciate it if I can get access to a projector because I’m planning to share a few pictures during my speech. Furthermore, a sound system will be required because I want to play a few audio recordings as well.
I hope you will accept my request. Thanking you in advance.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Urvashi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...zed by our college. My country has a very unique culture; therefore, I would like to sha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, i think, speaking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96858638743 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88996699168 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3288214616 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0833333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201421753962 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712438451562 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545953130673 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888688405911 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658243979068 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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