In recent decades, numerous numbers of people have decided to relocate to one of the urban areas that offer them more advantages. Consequently, no more places are available for the newcomers and the only place left is the countryside. While some people believe that constructing new homes in the countryside will be extremely detrimental to it. In my opinion, I found it the ideal way to increase its facilities and protect the urban's people from a miserable lifestyle.
If the countryside lands are not used for expansion, many tall buildings will be constructed to comprise the exceeding numbers of people. Hence, the public services will be distributed on tremendous numbers of people which will result in an uncomfortable life to all the citizens. One salient example that elaborates this problem is the traffic congestion that most of the capitals are suffering from nowadays.
providing more houses in the countryside will increase the number of vital facilities that are considered as one of the basic needs nowadays. To clarify, people mainly tend to go to the city center in the pursuance of reaching a crucial service or searching for work, but if people went to live in those rural areas, governments would find that constructing some basic facilities is mandatory to satisfy the people's needs. For instance, if the number of people who are living in the countryside increased, countries will start to build more schools and hospitals which will obviously lead to more job vacancies.
In conclusion, the significant increase in population will result in an urban sprawl that will lead to deleterious effects on urbanized settlers. Whereas, building homes in the countryside will push the country to construct more essential facilities that could result in self-sufficiency for countryside inhabitants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the only place left is the countryside. While some people believe that constructing n...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Providing
...apitals are suffering from nowadays. providing more houses in the countryside will inc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 937.175257732 164% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28965517241 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00866762141 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555172413793 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 290.88556701 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1272891078 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.833333333 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250918193765 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096207322182 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694161207647 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153579487578 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066701934484 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 8.37731958763 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 70.7449484536 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 41.2886597938 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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