You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.Say where you think you left the papers.Explain why they are so importantTell the mana

Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter because I had left some crucial documents when I was at your hotel "Four Seasons" on the 20th of April.

To begin with, While I was preparing my luggage inside my room in order to check out, I forgot to put these papers in my suitcase. I think that these documents were not in front of me at this moment. Thus, they exist in one of two possible places, whether they are in the top shelf of the closet, or inside the room's locker.

Unfortunately, these files contain essential data about the plan of a current project related to my corporate which is going to be delivered by the end of the month. Consequently, they are essential to complete our progress because if we did not deliver the project before the deadline, this would cost the company substantial amounts of money.

Finally, I would humbly ask if one of the supervisors could be responsible for finding these official papers as rapid as possible in an effort to save them from being lost or thrown away. Because if I did not get back these documents, not only will the company suffer in order to recreate another plan, but I will also lose my job.

Thanks a lot for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Abanoub Emil

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rooms'' or 'room's'?
Suggestion: rooms'; room's
... top shelf of the closet, or inside the rooms locker. Unfortunately, these files c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, so, thus, well, while, i think, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64628820961 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59929156165 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637554585153 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8706746456 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116558254063 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040520283444 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584865081817 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627199156313 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094304575658 0.0580467560999 162% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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