Dear Mia,
I hope you had an amazing birthday celebration with your family members and friends last night. I feel very terrible that I could not attend your party since you are one of my important persons in my life.
The reason why I was not able to join you last night is because my pet, Daisy became sick and I had to rush to a vet to ensure her health conditions. It happened suddenly, therefore, contacting you did not come up to my mind even I should have at least messaged you. However, my phone was actually running out of its battery and your number is in there so that It was literary impossible to inform my situation last night.
Ever since I feel so sorry and sad that I have missed your birthday party, I would like to plan a mini party for you by booking one of my friend's club which is famous for some unique activities.
Please let me know if you are happy with this idea so I can prepare some surprises as well.
Best regards,
Kate
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...some surprises as well. Best regards, Kate
^^^
Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rprises as well. Best regards, Kate
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, therefore, well, at least, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31318681319 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27295280522 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2487046458 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315334087994 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13051305178 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811369900724 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193453726873 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870533867712 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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