Qn : You are going to visit UK for an English and Homestay program. Write a letter to your host family. In your letter :
- introduce yourself
-ask the family some questions to get essential information about the UK.
-tell the family scheduled date of arrival and time
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Parksons,
I am Ms. Xyz Xyz and I am writing to you in reference to my Homestay application. Thank you for accepting my request! I am glad to know that you will be the first host family that I will reside with during my trip to the UK.
I am from India and as of now, I am pursuing my graduation in sociology at the Mumbai University. I live with my parents and two siblings in the city of Mumbai. I work a part time job at Caesar's Institute which has funded the "English and Homestay" program at Oxford University.
I am extremely excited about my trip to the UK. I was wondering whether you could provide me some information regarding the transport facilities in London so that I could familiarize my way around the city. Also, Could you also suggest some places in the UK that I could visit over the weekends ? This will help me plan my travel itinerary. Finally, I would like to know the weather conditions in the UK , so that I could carry clothing and accessories accordingly.
I will complete my graduation by the end of this month. The homestay program begins after six months, hence I have booked my tickets for the 2nd of December to Heathrow and will arrive at your residence by cab at 3.00 p.m.
I would appreciate it if you could revert back to me regarding the queries at the earliest. I am looking forward to spending some quality time with your family in London.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Xyz
...ar Mr. and Mrs. Parksons, I am Ms. Xyz Xyz and I am writing to you in reference to...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in sociology at the Mumbai University. I live with my parents and two siblings i...
^
Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and two siblings in the city of Mumbai. I work a part time job at Caesars Instit...
^
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...iblings in the city of Mumbai. I work a part time job at Caesars Institute which has fun...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...umbai. I work a part time job at Caesars Institute which has funded the 'Eng...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...' program at Oxford University. I am extremely excited about my trip to t...
^
Line 6, column 50, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...emely excited about my trip to the UK. I was wondering whether you could provide...
^
Line 6, column 406, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to know the weather conditions in the UK , so that I could carry clothing and acce...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, first, hence, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54198473282 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72685181937 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7921778594 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172456069962 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590226487199 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049347556027 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780301224086 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484676615451 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.