On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to a travel insurance claim that I need to make for my laptop which I lost during my vacation to Mumbai.
The laptop is a lenovo YP14 model which is black in color and can be uniquely identified by the neon colored lights emitted from the sides of the keyboard. It has an Intel version 5 processor which one can identify by the stamped sticker placed on top of the flat screen. In addition to this, it is covered in a red casing of styrofoam.
When I left from Mumbai, I had placed my laptop within my cabin bag for safety purposes. However, due to the flight being overcrowded I was forced to check it in along with my luggage. Upon arrival at Mumbai airport, I was unable to find it among the cavalcade of luggage on the conveyor belts. I have reported this incident to the airport staff, but they have not responded to the complaint since three weeks. The complain number is 35566778.
I believe I am eligible to claim the funds for the laptop as it is stated in your travel insurance policy for lost items. I would appreciate it if you could consider my case for a full claim, equivalent to the cost of the laptop which is rupees 56000. On concluding a decision, please transfer the same into account number 99988334. I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Xyz.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
... laptop is a lenovo YP14 model which is black in color and can be uniquely identified by the n...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'processor' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'processors'.
Suggestion: processors
...the keyboard. It has an Intel version 5 processor which one can identify by the stamped s...
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Line 7, column 412, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ded to the complaint since three weeks. The complain number is 35566778. I believe I am e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52244897959 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45742082637 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624489795918 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6983051344 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1428571429 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129059313636 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403237142444 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048759750486 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747832259851 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660658699884 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.