On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter Describe the item you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insura

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:

Describe the item you lost
Explain how you lost it
Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to report the loss of my guitar, which was covered under your insurance policy, and it was lost during my holidays in Hong-Kong.

My name is Harpreet, and my policy number is 7798260. Let me explain what had happened exactly in detail. First of all, i took this guitar with me, as i wanted it to play it on my holidays. I vividly remember carrying this guitar almost everywhere i went. Unfortunately, while leaving the hotel, i forgot it in my room as far as i remember. However, when i called the hotel reception and asked if they found my guitar in the room, but as per them, there was nothing left in my room.

As this item was covered under my insurance policy, i would like to know how can i claim the amount for my lost guitar. Also, would it possible for you to share the complete process on my mail ID, which is already there in your records.

Please do let me know if any further details are required from my end. Hoping for your prompt response on this.

Yours faithfully.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (2 votes)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ppened exactly in detail. First of all, i took this guitar with me, as i wanted i...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... of all, i took this guitar with me, as i wanted it to play it on my holidays. I ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... carrying this guitar almost everywhere i went. Unfortunately, while leaving the ...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Unfortunately, while leaving the hotel, i forgot it in my room as far as i rememb...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hotel, i forgot it in my room as far as i remember. However, when i called the ho...
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Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oom as far as i remember. However, when i called the hotel reception and asked if...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... was covered under my insurance policy, i would like to know how can i claim the ...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ce policy, i would like to know how can i claim the amount for my lost guitar. Al...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43523316062 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37055550669 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626943005181 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5975916766 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8181818182 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145838762673 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531758895231 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664129737979 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107194630829 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893475213179 0.0580467560999 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ppened exactly in detail. First of all, i took this guitar with me, as i wanted i...
^
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... of all, i took this guitar with me, as i wanted it to play it on my holidays. I ...
^
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... carrying this guitar almost everywhere i went. Unfortunately, while leaving the ...
^
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Unfortunately, while leaving the hotel, i forgot it in my room as far as i rememb...
^
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hotel, i forgot it in my room as far as i remember. However, when i called the ho...
^
Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oom as far as i remember. However, when i called the hotel reception and asked if...
^
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... was covered under my insurance policy, i would like to know how can i claim the ...
^
Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ce policy, i would like to know how can i claim the amount for my lost guitar. Al...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43523316062 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37055550669 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626943005181 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5975916766 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8181818182 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145838762673 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531758895231 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664129737979 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107194630829 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893475213179 0.0580467560999 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.