On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter
• Describe the item you lost
• Explain how you lost it
• Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to you to inform that I have lost my camera last week. Please find my insurance number All0102 and camera details - Cannon camera; model no Cam089thg01, black color.
5 days ago, on July 3rd, I went to shopping with my friends. Everybody was enjoying and we took several pictures. I entered into a shop for internet café and camera was kept my desk. After completing my work, I left the shop. After coming out, with-in a minute, I realized that I am not carrying the camera. I immediately went to the shop, but it was too late as camera was missing and moreover, shopkeeper didn’t had security cameras in place.
Given the circumstances, now, it would be highly appreciated by me if your company could give the claim, which the price, Rs. 50,000, of the camera, as soon as possible, so that a new camera can be bought by me. I shall be thankful to you for this.
Thanks
Yours Faithfully
Alka
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61904761905 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58505151776 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.732142857143 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2327374677 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5454545455 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865933536867 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383513039238 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683229089569 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733051036741 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697952925036 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.