On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letterdescribe the item you lostexplain how you lost ittell the insur

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request you a refund for a lost item during my trip to California. The item that has been lost is a 160 canon camera, the latest model, in black color with a 2GB memory card. Please let me explain in detail.
My family and I embarked on a trip to California on 27 December 2018 on a weekend. We left on a Saturday morning to attend a Football Tournament held at Sports Stadium near the airport. I am positive that I took my camera with me to the event and I remember taking a lot of photographs in that location. However, I noticed that my camera had disappeared only after I reached my hotel. The next day, I contacted the receptionist of the stadium to inquire about my camera. Unfortunately, nothing was found in their "Lost and Found". Hence, I filled a police complaint regarding this.
Hopefully, my travel insurance would be able to cover the cost of my camera, as it is listed in the list of valuable items. I, hereby, enclose my insurance statements, police report and the receipt of my camera for your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Abarna.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, regarding

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58291457286 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84749531873 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638190954774 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6565243498 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1538461538 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156486753397 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488674381636 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593582824836 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114375476088 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709447750128 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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