Although sports events are very popular, violence at these events is on the increase. Why is this so? What should authorities do to prevent violence from taking place at sports events?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Despite the fact that sports are considered to be the biggest entertainment to people all over the world, the violence in these events is a pressing concern. What are the prime reasons for the fans to act so brutally towards each other and what the authorities can do to eradicate such behavior?
People are enthusiastic as well as desperate when it comes to their favorite games. From small kids to mature adults go crazy from the moment the game starts. Although sports are meant for entertainment, some people are too addicted to go completely insane over their favorite players or the team. As a result, people, regardless of age or gender, indulge themselves in illegal betting against players or teams and this usually involves a huge chunk of money. Subsequently, if the team or the participants, whom they support, do not perform well at a particular match, people who have invested an exorbitant price upon them, get infuriated and it sparks violence among them. For Instance, India has witnessed many crime reports against illegal betting when it comes to World Cup Cricket Tournament, conducted by ICC. Apart from this, popular sports games are often crowded and moreover, the ticket prices are huge. Hence, everyone wants a comfortable and convenient surrounding to enjoy the sport, however, this is impossible with the sheer number of spectators. Ultimately, this creates arguments and violence due to frustration.
In such a scenario, police officers must maintain strict rules and regulations to maintain law and order. People, who are involved in such irrational activities in a public event, must be excluded and banned from attending any such events. Additionally, they must be fined a huge amount. Such harsh punishment might instill some self-control within people. Moreover, it is required to ensure peace between fans as games are solely dedicated to entertainment.
To recapitulate, I would say the reasons behind violence occurring in sports events are illegal betting and over-crowding of audiences, and local regime can enforce tough punishments to reduce such acts and maintain peace and harmony.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25513196481 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85243344114 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618768328446 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7257530766 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.411764706 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244358525402 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646774338989 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565397301157 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142321711986 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626543957053 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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