Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Crime rates are constantly increasing and we notice multiple crime reports every single day. While some people think capital punishment helps to reduce violence in the society, others think it is not a moral thing to do to humanity. However, I do not believe harsh punishment would bring out any changes in crime rates.
Since the prehistoric ages, the world has seen a huge surge in crime and violence. It has caused great harm to mankind and the environment. However, if we look into the roots of these crimes, we can notice that the people, who are involved in violence, are terribly hurt themselves and are mentally scarred. For instance, people who are grown up in bad surrounding tend to hurt others. Hence, such violence can be reduced by sending mentally affected people to rehabilitation. By showering them with love, care, support, and affection, these men could learn to develop empathy towards others and might have a chance to live a peaceful life.
The Government can also take few steps to decrease crime rates rather than sentencing them to death. People, who involve in theft and murder for money, belongs mostly to poor families. Due to the pressure in the family and the requirement to provide basic facilities to their children make these men resort to violence. With the rise in daily prices of oil and fuel and no substantial increase in their salaries, these men literally have no choice rather than stealing money. Hence, if the government takes initiative to increase employment and perhaps find a way to reduce prices for daily commodities, such crimes might come to an end.
In conclusion, I would suggest that capital punishment is not the only solution to reduce violence and make our lives more secure. Although harsh punishment can induce fear among criminals, this is not the ideal solution to control violence in society. There is plenty of other feasible solution that would not only put the violence to an end but also help to make our world a better place.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90560471976 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55458930281 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9938932028 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8235294118 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207442745818 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625656571477 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733092042234 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13375421109 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929713057063 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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