Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
The thirst for exploring new and exotic places around the world is never-ending. Tourism has opened a wide range of opportunities and it has become the core reason for the economic development of a country. However, with the availability of latest technologies, people want to attempt the impossible and hence, more and more tourists are visiting dangerous places such as the Sahara Desert or the Antartic. In this essay, I will discuss both the advantages and the disadvantages of visiting such rare and risky places.
One of the reasons for people to embark on these environments is the thrill of visiting unheard places. Certain people have the constant urge to explore every single part of the world. This is beneficial for us to learn about the different aspects of the location such as climate, resources, habitats etc. This is highly informative, especially for the people who are interested in geography. Apart from that, we can learn about the biological aspects of this place. We can gain knowledge about the flora and fauna species. Learning about the habitats of these exotic locations is extremely helpful for the discovery of medical herbs and plantations. For instance, many exotic herbs, which are found in the Amazon forest, have brought a solution to numerous diseases.
On the flip side, visiting such places is detrimental and expensive. Going to unknown places requires a lot of safety measures and hence, requires additional men to accompany the tourists. The tourist also needs the assistance of an expert tour guide who is familiar with the location. Nevertheless, safety is never ensured. There are high risks of getting lost or even killed, under certain circumstances. The cost incurred on this expenditure is enormous as well. The safety measures, the men, the flight would cost an arm and a leg for an average person. Hence, such locations are not affordable for many people. Finally, the government splashing out on tourism for such locations, which is not an option for an average citizen, is unnecessary. This is an utter waste of money and resources.
In conclusion, more and more people visiting dangerous places is like a two-sided sword: it has plenty of advantages as well as drawbacks. People must research and be aware of the conditions of these places before setting their foot on these places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08831168831 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79086769412 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535064935065 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3065936555 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0416666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319336162283 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781268685611 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893827205204 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205392193227 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949132075341 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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