In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
With the constant rise in population, the demand for accommodation has soared beyond the threshold level that people are unable to find locations to contruct their homes. Due to the urban development, the mainland is congested with apartments and individual houses and people resort to build houses in the countryside. However, some people do not endorse this decision as it would cause a major destruction to the villages. I do not agree with this statement. In this essay, I will discuss the benefits of people contructing houses in the countryside.
As mentioned previously, due to over-population in the urban areas, people are unable to find places to contruct their houses. With the industrial development, houses and markets have cropped up everywhere like mushrooms after the rain. In such scenario, it is almost impossible for a person to locate a decent place to live. Since everyone migrate to cities and towns for educational purposes, the schools and universities are established in the urban areas rather than the rural areas. Moreover, the industries, factories and other institutions which provides employment to thousands of people are also developed only in the cities. Hence, people in the rural areas are unable to access quality education and job opportunities. Furthermore, people in villages do not have hospital facilities or a sound transport system. The main reason why villages are often neglected is because they are less populated. Hence, if houses are contructed in countryside, these areas might stand a chance to develop and hopefully, the community can benefit from that.
Interestingly, builing houses in the countryside would not lead to its destruction, but help in its improvisation. It is possible to contruct houses and also preserve the natural resources of the environment by proper planning. For Instance, Kerala, a state in India, is extremely beautiful and picturesque because of people follow strict rules and regulations for maintaining their place. Hence, if people are more conscious and responsible, people can live happily in villages without destroying its beauty and livelihood.
To conclude, I would say with the help of a sound organisation, the advantages in building houses at countryside are enormous for both the people and the environment. Moreover, it is essential to maintain a balance in the society by large. Hence, contructing houses in the countryside is a good choice for people who are looking for a peaceful place to live.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31313131313 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07495718633 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2548141179 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.19047619 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61904761905 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144420309333 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044464086983 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356187920452 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100993057728 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333014946062 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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