On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance tocover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter● describe the item you lost● explain how you lost it● tel

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to
cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
● describe the item you lost
● explain how you lost it
● tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to claim the cost of a precious item, which was insured by your company. Please allow me to elaborate on my situation in more detail.

The lost item was Apple iPhone 9th generation with the black body, and I purchased it in 2018 worth 90,000 PKR, the receipt is attached along with this letter.

I was traveling from Rawalpindi to Karachi by the Daewoo bus on the 8th of August 2019. As the phone runs out of battery I put it in my hand carry, and I fall asleep, when I woke up and check my bag, all of sudden I realized that the phone is missing. I reported at the nearest police station.

I would like you to generate the estimated cost as soon as possible so that I can buy a new cell phone because the communication with kith and kin is affected.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Maryam Khan

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 709.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40372670807 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37807910165 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9251598189 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7777777778 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194636381545 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062853354984 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057896128223 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906373336115 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440650984822 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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