On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:describe the item you lostexplain how you lost ittell

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:

 describe the item you lost

 explain how you lost it

 tell the insurance company what you want them to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have been using gold travel insurance plan of your renowned company for the last two years. My policy number is A1004567 and it covers the insurance of lost items during travel up to the amount of 3 lakhs. To bring in your notice, I want to acquire the claim for my laptop which was lost during my visit to Jaipur last week.

It was the grey DELL laptop with model number HP608. I brought it for Rs.35000 last month from Vijay Sales, Gurgaon. This incident happened while my one day visit to Jaipur on 1st September. I carried my laptop because I had to accomplish my assigned office tasks. During the journey, we had a 30 minutes stay at Rajouri Garden, where we had snacks and when we were about to check out I noticed my laptop bag was missing. We searched for it for about one hour but all went in vain. Consequently, I registered a police complaint and I have attached a copy of the FIR and the invoice to this letter.

As per the policy guidelines, a claim for lost laptop is covered, I request you to approve my claim and compensate me for the full value of it. If you need any more information, please call me on my number: 9478682521.

Thank you for your time and support.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Prabhjot

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 566, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt and I have attached a copy of the FIR and the invoice to this letter. As ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4674796748 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37408118744 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1274081453 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220054991524 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778797946161 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757095442704 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152688831915 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891134253314 0.0580467560999 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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