On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter Describe the item you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insura

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:

Describe the item you lost

• Explain how you lost it

• Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir,

I am is Maurice and I am writing this letter to you for reporting of a lost golden ring while returning from my honeymoon. it's a 22 Karats gold studded with ruby over initials of my wife Anna . The net worth of ring is Rs 2,50,000 and have bill from jewellary shop merchant.I clearly remember of wearing it till we returned to airport. However, while checking my luggage I realised that I lost it. Immediately we informed to Aviation security and raised a compliant in airport with help of my Airline.

After our arrival we received our complaint number as 12/2019AP. I have also received soft copy of complaint by email which I am attaching with this letter. As a pre requisite to our Visa to Paris we had travel insurance covering us along with valuable items such as gold jewellary, gadgets etc from your Max insurers. Policy details along with insurance number,premium paid and items covered are clearly mentioned in insurance certificate is also attached with this letter. As my lost ring is on the list of coverable items I would like to claim for my lost ring.I hope the details and documents that I supplied suffice for my claim. Kindly let me know further if any other document required.

Votes
Average: 9.6 (5 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...is letter to you for reporting of a lost golden ring while returning from my hone...
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...ring while returning from my honeymoon. its a 22 Karats gold studded with ruby o...
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...ng while returning from my honeymoon. its a 22 Karats gold studded with ruby over...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...ng while returning from my honeymoon. its a 22 Karats gold studded with ruby over...
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... with ruby over initials of my wife Anna . The net worth of ring is Rs 2,50,000 an...
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...t worth of ring is Rs 2,50,000 and have bill from jewellary shop merchant.I clearly ...
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...ant in airport with help of my Airline. After our arrival we received our compla...
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...licy details along with insurance number,premium paid and items covered are clearly ment...
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... I would like to claim for my lost ring.I hope the details and documents that I s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72769953052 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63829640362 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638497652582 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5128282918 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5454545455 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211453591435 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672775058022 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644013402026 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154825755574 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405422223833 0.0580467560999 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.