Recently a business group visited your work place and someone left something behind. Write a letter to the leader of the business group and say
– How you and your co-workers enjoyed their visit,
– Who the item belongs to and what the item is,
– Suggest how you can return the item to its owner.
Dear Mr.Smith,
I hope you and your business group have enjoyed your visit of my company. I have learnt an incredible amount from you and it was a pleasure for me and my colleagues to visit you. I believe it would be a great start for us to amalgamate in the near future.
Unfortunately, yesterday after you left my company I realized that one of your team members left a hand bag here. It is a black leather bag which is a brand of Dorsa and I guess it belongs to your executive manager who was sitting next to you in the meeting room.
Since you will stay in the city for one more day I can send the bag to your hotel by one of my colleagues. Please tell me about the appropriate time that better suits you and I will send it to you.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, I hope you and your business group ha...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Rahi Honarvar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22784810127 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4161635911 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0145212273 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2222222222 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218706724088 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913949088192 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839393714174 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113988678834 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704879211403 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.