Recently, your position in the company has changed, and accordingly, you are required to write a letter to ask for some corresponding training programs that contains the following information:
• What was your last position?
• What qualities does your new position require?
• How does the training help you in your new position?
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to you to ask you permission to participate in coaching program related with my new position in our organization.
Previously I worked as financial manager for three years and carried responsibilities in coordinating financial resources of the company and ensured their rational use.
My current duties are much wider than at my last position. I am an executive manager of our Construction Department and I am responsible for construction of our huge projects, such us shopping malls, entertainment centers and business centers. I am really pleased with this appointment and your trust. For this reason, I would like to attend some seminars or training programs to gain appropriate knowledge and skills.
As a financial manager I did not have to know much about building standards or about organizing construction projects. Some training would benefit me and, as a consequence, our company, as I would be able to focus on the weaknesses quickly and take appropriate actions immediately to increase our effectiveness.
Thank you in advance for your time and consideration.
I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39673913043 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3108444074 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646739130435 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3871805125 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198851167206 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891652484966 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069408386351 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107938282699 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595234393645 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 8.71597938144 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.