Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. But other say film should have educational value.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It’s argued that the only reason of films is means of entertainment, while others believe that it should a method of education. Although people mainly watch film for relaxing after a stressful workday or studying time, I believe that films are also a great way to learn new things in an interesting atmosphere.
On the one hand, some would argue that films are created for the entertaining purpose because men and women usually view a film in their leisure time to feel unwind. Movies and film series are both work of arts which help viewers to escape from the real world and the stress in real life. For example, a survey conducted in Vietnam CGV cinemas in 2018 showed that more than 70% of audiences come to movie theatre due to feeling stressful and wanting to relax. However, i believe that films should include educational content because most of viewers are young people and they can learn new things effectively than in school.
On the other hand, others think that movies and television films should be a mean of education as young people can also obtain knowledge in an interesting method beside of school. This is because people can easily learn a new thing or raise their awareness while they are enjoy the film in their leisure time instead of being taught by teachers. For instance, a study of the Oxford University conducted in 2017 showed that children can learn 40% faster by watching films than learning in a class. Moreover, raising public awareness about global issue through movies and films is an effective way that governments and global organizations should consider to improve.
In conclusion, despite watching films is a primary recreation activity after a burden in real life, I believe that moves and films also a great method to educate people, especially young people, in a vivid and exciting way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the viewers') or simply say ''most viewers''.
Suggestion: most of the viewers; most viewers
...uld include educational content because most of viewers are young people and they can learn new...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...or raise their awareness while they are enjoy the film in their leisure time instead ...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider improving'.
Suggestion: consider improving
...rnments and global organizations should consider to improve. In conclusion, despite watching fil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 937.175257732 163% => OK
No of words: 312.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91025641026 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5117328232 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532051282051 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 290.88556701 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.3135706589 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 139.272727273 76.5299724578 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 16.8248392259 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299023206977 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123952001227 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689479159957 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193646979047 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426400838539 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 8.37731958763 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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