Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings are more important.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It’s argued that people must tackle the issue related to the extinction of a large number of animals, while others think that humanity should be prioritized. Although many urgent mankind problems need most resources to solve, I believe that preserving the animal world to remain the balance of the nature is more essential.
On the one hand, people believe that the human race should be placed on the top regardless of the extinction of many animal creatures because authorities need to prioritize their funding for global issues threating human life. In other words, the humankind is facing various problems, such as climate change and air pollution, affecting directly to the human life and governments and people need to concentrate all the resource to it. For example, a report of U.N. organization in 2017 showed that countries have to spend at least 1 - 2 billion dollars to set up the natural resource around the world and this amount can help millions of poor people overcome their hungers. However, I believe that men and women must conserve the potential extinct animal due to its critical role in the natural world.
On the other hand, some argued that state authorities and people urgently protect the animal species in the extinct list because these creatures play a vital role in the natural cycle. And the extinction of these can not recover, which damages to the balance of the natural world and causes many negative consequences to the Earth and human beings, such as rocketting the population of a particular species or the depletion of many food chains. For instance, the extinction of the lion in Australia helps to increase the kanguru population to a dangerous level and affect to the farm crops. Moreover, I believe that governments, businesses and people should protect the animal world, thus the younger generation don’t need to learn many animal species through books.
In conclusion, while some believe that humanity is the first priority due to many human life threats which need the concentration of many resources, I believe that people and authorities have to seek for solutions of the extinct animal to maintain the natural world in a balance stance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08563535912 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64918684223 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.371749436 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.363636364 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9090909091 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306918418866 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125980070766 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571521081713 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214020461947 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128610960588 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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