Although it was a difficult decision to make, you have decided to submit your resignation to your manager.
Write a letter to your manager
- Explain why you have decided to leave the company
- Describe why the decision was difficult to make
- Suggest a current staff member replace your position.
I regret to inform that I will resign from my post of Foreign exchange trader next month.
I have accepted a job offer of Citibank and I will work as a Team leader for the Trading team in their Treasury Department. I will be more responsibility as a senior level and this would give more opportunity for promotion. I am able to reduce the commuting time when I work for this position.
I have worked in our bank for a long time and I really enjoy working here. I got a good relationship with customers and colleagues. Another thing is the rewarding of all my work here.
And I would like to suggest Tom as my successor. In spite of not being here long, he is a fast learner and always makes good decisions. In fact, John is competent and dependable staff for managers and all team members. He also stands out in our department due to working well under high pressure.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind regards,
Khang Do.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ding team in their Treasury Department. I will be more responsibility as a senior...
^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ld give more opportunity for promotion. I am able to reduce the commuting time wh...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... time when I work for this position. I have worked in our bank for a long time...
^
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g time and I really enjoy working here. I got a good relationship with customers ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so, well, another thing, in fact, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47428571429 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.607392943 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1073435119 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.2307692308 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0550574748255 0.216113520407 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188405771422 0.0766984524023 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0193129481327 0.0603063233224 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0329446597496 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014455635447 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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