Nowadays, with the advancement in technology and the internet, watching movies, series, and other videos on computers or smartphone is more frequent than before. However, others argue that to enjoy movies to full extent, going to the movie theater is a must. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of this development.
To begin with, these days, a majority of people own laptops, smartphones, and tablets with high-speed internet, where they can watch free movies, music videos, and different news channels for free. Moreover, they have the freedom to watch movies on their gadgets without traveling to the theater. Because of limited capacity, booking tickets for the movies is full of hassle, also the movie ticket can be expensive as well. In addition to this, there are numerous streaming websites such as Netflix, Hotstar, and Amazon Prime, which are providing high definition, latest, and popular movies for a very insignificant price.
However, watching movies in the theater provides a full form of entertainment, for example, in my country, multiplex theaters are built inside the malls, hence adults and youngsters prefer to visit mals for shopping, food, and watching movies with their friends and family on weekends, which provide them the ability to enjoy their whole day. Also, theaters are now equipped with huge modern screens and advance audio systems, which add exceptional effects to the movies. Moreover, advances 3D movies are produced more frequently, which tend to attract more people to the theaters. Additionally, the service at the movie theaters have enhanced exceptionally, various type of new seats such as reclyner seats have been installed viewers can also order food on their seats in these modern cinema halls.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, even though viewers have options to watch movies on their tablets or smartphones for a affordable price, yet they still prefer to watch movies in theaters to experience new audio and visual effects in movies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 937.175257732 180% => OK
No of words: 319.0 206.0 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28526645768 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63770331887 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 127.690721649 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 290.88556701 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.463917525773 1509% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4854105774 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 76.5299724578 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 4.34317383033 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.061932858852 0.216113520407 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262205207767 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0197943357206 0.0603063233224 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0421117145691 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122040955326 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 8.37731958763 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 41.2886597938 223% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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