Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to acknowledge the efforts of one of your hotel staff members: Mr. Peterson Albama, who helped me find my laptop. I was visiting London because of the official work; therefore, I stayed at your hotel from the 1st of July 2019 to 3rdof July 2019.
During my stay, I was working with the clients on a confidential report for the financial year 2020-2021. However, In the evening, I went for a swim in the hotel’s swimming pool and left my laptop on the side table; but, when I returned to the room, I could not find it where I initially kept it. I panicked and immediately contacted the security members; they checked all the surveillance cameras and found an unidentified member leaving my room. Subsequently, Mr. Peterson assured me as his brother was in police services, and he worked the whole night to identify and catch the culprit.
I was finally relieved as it could have ended my career and sabotaged the company’s reputation. I would request you to give him recognition in terms of monetary benefits and if possible, a promotion to encourage other members to be diligent towards their duty.
Yours faithfully,
Simran Khatri
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86699507389 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85453422615 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9118083615 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11766871149 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415200437232 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312232224473 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815503270805 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302405510737 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.