The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my discontent with the garbage collection service in our community. We have several concerns about their entire process of collecting rubbish from our society.
Firstly, a few months ago, as per authorities' announcement, all residence were asked to segregate their waste as per its type in three dustbins provided by the government, and we have been maintaining the same without fail. However, the collectors are ignorant of this new process and they have been blending all the rubbish in the one huge collection bin, which is draining all the efforts we are placing into separating this waste. Further, they are usually coming pretty late in the morning. As a result, all the rubbish lingers inside our homes, which is the source of many ailments. This is bothering all of the members of the community.
I would urge you to please take the required steps on this appeal as soon as possible.
Prompt support would be highly appreciable.
Yours Sincerely.
Harpreet
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authorities'' or 'authority's'?
Suggestion: authorities'; authority's
...y. Firstly, a few months ago, as per authorities announcement, all residence were asked ...
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Line 5, column 607, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rce of many ailments. This is bothering all of the members of the community. I would u...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09467455621 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66871121276 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5120143849 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148738125882 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623862350188 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597589722391 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689313102578 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610861122432 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.