Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Anna, I am a regular customer of your transport service. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the recent concern with bus service, precisely the reliability of it.
I am a student and commuting since last year by the bus, on route Kale Street to University. I have never a complaint regarding any issue till now, recently the new driver is messing up with the timings at bus stops, eventually, being late he drive roughly on roads, even sometimes avoiding the traffic signals just to get on time to destinations. Many travelers complain him to be conscious and be punctual, yet he never listens. Due to continuous delay at college, I have already missed several class lectures. In the next few months, exams are going to happen, in these crucial days, I cannot take a risk to miss the classes.
I suggest to have a talk with the driver and ask the matter. Apart from this, if he is not ready to provide good service then please replace him, otherwise, there is a possibility of customer and reputation loss.
Looking forward to any optimistic prompt action taken in this issue from your side, I thank you for your consideration.
Your Faithfully,
Anna Mathew
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...us, on route Kale Street to University. I have never a complaint regarding any is...
^
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'drives'.
Suggestion: drives
...at bus stops, eventually, being late he drive roughly on roads, even sometimes avoidi...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...annot take a risk to miss the classes. I suggest to have a talk with the driver...
^^^
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest having'.
Suggestion: suggest having
... take a risk to miss the classes. I suggest to have a talk with the driver and ask the matt...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, then, apart from, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77725118483 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75064492132 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696682464455 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5972827685 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6363636364 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1487516282 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540915180535 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360959494005 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798761919597 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358394627384 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.