There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring a problem into your knowledge. The public bus on Garden Housing route has not been arriving on time for the last two weeks. Due to this issue, I am unable to reach office on time, and I would like to suggest a solution to this problem.
The issue is that bus No. 201 arrives late every day. It has been reaching on its designated bus stops late for more than two weeks almost. Although I talked to the driver to ask about this issue, he did not respond me properly. I realized that he is the reason behind the issue as he seems very sleepy and lazy while driving.
This issue is not only causing me mental stress for being waiting for half an hour on the bus stop but also becoming a problem at my job place. Since my boss has warned me strictly yesterday and handed over me an explanation letter. I am feeling really stressed as I do not own private car and the only way to reach my office is through the bus.
I would like to offer a solution and that is to change the driver. On this route, post an efficient and active driver who could perform his duty with discipline and punctuality. I hope that you could comprehend my stress level and would agree to this suggestion.
I look forward to seeing your prompt action about resolving this issue.
Yours faithfully,
Syed Ali.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33734939759 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25612038515 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598393574297 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.53718565 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186795300245 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597425524267 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504553155105 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915513736191 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666219164863 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.