There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concerns related to the bus services in my area. Over the past few days, I am extremely unhappy with the public transport facility services because of the limited number of buses in my town.
Every day, I have to walk for 20 minutes to New street bus station which is 10 km distance from my home, and I catch a bus which goes to Central town because I have to attend software engineering classes at Brunswick college. This kind of traveling consumes more energy and I get tired after reaching to my college.
Since I feel exhausted after reaching college, I am unable to focus on my morning lectures. This affects my academic performance. Also, I am a student and it is the responsibility of the government to maintain the health and safety standards for pupils since we are the backbone of a nation.
I would request you to please link a few buses from my home bus stop to Central town bus station. Not only, availability of buses from my home bus stop will help students in terms of convenience and comfort travel to college but also for the individuals who have to visit the popular place in the city. I will be grateful for you to consider my request
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response to this letter.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61603375527 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62031091751 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8761858847 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4545454545 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134273922303 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563804326703 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456549973036 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719845388784 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041270993861 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.