There is a problem in the road outside your house.
Write a letter to your local Councillor. in your letter
- Introduce yourself
-Explain what the problem is
-Tell the councilor what you would like to be done.
Dear Counselor,
I write this letter to bring to your attention about the discomfort caused by water-logged on road outside my house. my name is Saritha Pillai, and I am a resident of JC Nagar.
Recently, the area where I live have witnessed heavy rain because of which the place is suffering from clogged water and potholes. In such condition, it becomes really difficult for us to step outside the house. Moreover, lack of proper drainage system causes the e-waste to float on roadway. These wasteful materials causes pungent odour and is a compromise to health hygiene. Since, we do not have street lights, visibility of holes on road is zero and puts a person's life at stake.
Therefore, I would request you to re-construct the road, and to put-up the light poles at the residential path for our safety. Also, it will be great if the your team could work on improving the sewage system so that water accumulation on street could be prevented. Please contact me on +91-92453-23234 for further details.
I solicit your co-operation.
Your faithfully,
Saritha Pillai
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... water-logged on road outside my house. my name is Saritha Pillai, and I am a resi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s Saritha Pillai, and I am a resident of JC Nagar. Recently, the area where I ...
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Message: You should probably use 'cause'.
Suggestion: cause
...at on roadway. These wasteful materials causes pungent odour and is a compromise to he...
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ity of holes on road is zero and puts a persons life at stake. Therefore, I would re...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'your'?
Suggestion: the; your
...r our safety. Also, it will be great if the your team could work on improving the sewage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99447513812 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8108681619 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696132596685 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4899986663 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180378299312 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060440332578 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667228790549 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110052546324 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485946854627 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.