Dear Manpreet,
How are you? Hope I find you in best of health and spirits. Firstly, I wish to thank you for the nice stay i had at your apartment. Even you were not available at home, still you managed to lend me the keys. Your house is very tidy and the interior as well architechture is beautiful. It is very well ventilated.
However, I am now writing you to apologise also. The room you kept unlocked for me had one beautiful expensive bowl. It had some fruits kept that i thought you probably kept for me. On the very first day, I had some grapes from it and the moment I turned, my elbow strike the bowl at once and I saw it broken into pieces on the floor. I felt so sorry for what was happened by mistake. Somehow, I managed to clean the mess and threw all glass pieces into the dustbin. I really want to say sorry to you for all that what happened by mistake.
Due to the guilt and my desire to cover up for the same, I am sending you one dress. I wish you will like it. I found this dress in the store and thought that it is meant just for you. I hope that you will like it.
Please do let me know if you liked the dress.
Love
Shilpa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., I wish to thank you for the nice stay i had at your apartment. Even you were no...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ever, I am now writing you to apologise also. The room you kept unlocked for me had ...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sive bowl. It had some fruits kept that i thought you probably kept for me. On th...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... thought that it is meant just for you. I hope that you will like it. Please do ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.02173913043 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10036003755 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6375468956 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.3888888889 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7777777778 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281108928875 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922507374353 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595674174981 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165080056142 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722646635568 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.9 8.37731958763 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.15 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.09 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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