A Work colleague has applied for new job, and he/she has asked you to write a reference letter to the new employer.Write a letter to the employer to recommend your colleague.In your letter,a. State your reason for writing and say how you know the applican

Essay topics:

A Work colleague has applied for new job, and he/she has asked you to write a reference letter to the new employer.

Write a letter to the employer to recommend your colleague.

In your letter,
a. State your reason for writing and say how you know the applicant.
b. Describe your colleague relevant qualifications and skills.
c. and explain why you are recommending this person for the job.

Dear Sir/Madam,

My Name is James Smith, and I am the owner and restaurant manager of Maroon Delights. I am writing this letter to you to recommend Oliver Rao for the advertised position of trainee Restaurant Manager at your premises Hinds Wayside Inn.

Oliver Rao has been working with me since November 2016. He started his career as a kitchen hand and then, become an assistant manager with his hard work and dedication. Moreover, he has achieved a diploma in management while working here through apprenticeship and, have acquired a set of skills and knowledge that can be required in handling any food business.

Furthermore, he is an honest and a reliable worker who is equally passionate about pursuing a career in the restaurant field. As I can not offer him any above position as he is already in the second charge in my business, I would be proud to see him growing in his life. I genuinely believe that his ideas and motivation will benefit your business if he is selected. If you would like to discuss any further, please do not hesitate to contact me on my number given on the card enclosed with his letter.

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours faithfully,
James Smith.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77033492823 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.684845851 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.0222303396 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177684024444 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684620687872 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739008803594 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983340656052 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525934815743 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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