Write a letter to the bank s head office In your letter explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:

• explain why you are writing

• express concern about the missing card

• ask them what they intend to do

You do NOT need to write your own address

Dear sir,

Writing this letter to inform you about card number 11253489 was not contain in that envelope, which I received from postman as on 30/12/2019, but the letter was attached with that. A parcel on 30/12/2019 had been delivered by delivery boy. That is received by my mate. When I came back from the office she handed over me that envelop without consisting card and the envelop was also torn from the bottom.

As I opt the Short message service of the bank and pay it for monthly direct from the account. I applied for credit card 15 days ago. On 20/12/2019 I received an official message from bank that above said card number has issued under my name and will be received by end of the month with consisted a letter of card personal identification number.

Now, I want to know what are the consequences which will be faced by me due to the loss of card. Is there any possibility that someone can misuse that card and the liability of that card will belong to me. Kindly block that card, so that I can escape from any financial loss.

Hope you will accept my request and do this needful

Yours sincerely

Sham

Votes
Average: 8.1 (4 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, Writing this letter to inform you about ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
... you about card number 11253489 was not contain in that envelope, which I received from...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hat envelop without consisting card and the envelop was also torn from the bottom. As ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.03092783505 429% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58536585366 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33956223629 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614634146341 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8986339507 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4545454545 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157947376934 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530707591241 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535086182998 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852372173795 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203084231633 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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