Some people think that the internet will replace traditional books in the future. Do you believe this would be positive or a negative development?

Essay topics:

Some people think that the internet will replace traditional books in the future. Do you believe this would be positive or a negative development?

it is being assumed by various people that in the coming time period e-books will take place of physical books. I think this trend will create positive impact on environment as well as personal life, which will be described in the following paragraphs with real facts.

it will become a helping hand to release some burden on environment, because usage of paper will be stopped. people will utilize digital books which do not require any sheet and it will also decrease the demand of paper, which means the cutting of trees especially for paper reason will be stopped. For example, with the existence of e-paper people nowadays do not purchase newspaper on daily basis they all use their phone applications to come know about national or international news. Therefore, by using internet people will contribute to maintain balance of environment, which has been misbalanced due to deforestation.

With the help of internet, people do not need to carry any physical book. they can download at any time, at anywhere, because of its mobility. Moreover, the cost of e-books is much less than physical books, which can be afford by everyone. it is also possible to buy books in any particular language like hindi, punjabi, marathi and so on. To illustrate nowadays a religious book of Sikhism named Sh, Sukhmani Sahib do not need to buy. There are lots of mobile applications through which people can read it at anywhere without any interruption. Hence it become more comfortable for an individual to carry numbers of books without any physical weight.

Conclusively, learning from e-books makes the life easy and also help to maintain balance in environment, which can cause of big disaster due to extra consumption of natural goods.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07638888889 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71951927885 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2909087475 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243597977225 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088904357512 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609977879898 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14409182518 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797912241778 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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