Write a letter to a book store manager who is living in another city. Ask him/her to make available a book that you are interested in. In your letter, you should tell:
– What book you are looking for?
– Why you need this book?
– How you plan to purchase the book?
Dear Mr.John,
My name is Rehana, your veteran customer and I am writing this letter to inform you that I want to buy a book “The Ramayana”. Thus, Please make this available by 20th July.
As I told you, I want “The Ramayana” because in this book we cannot only gain spiritual knowledge but also learn real-life lessons which are necessary for this fast-paced life. Unless you cannot cope up with this modern world, you do not update yourself in all manners. This book is religious and containing vast knowledge about life.
Well, being a bibliophile person, I have read myriad books in my life till date. But this book I want to read because this is suggested by one of my childhood friends. He told me that he liked it a lot and gained elaborated knowledge. As we speak the same language he told me that this book will be liked by me too. That is why I am eager to read this book.
I want to buy this in person because this is a holy book and I respect it a lot. I will come on 20th July in the evening, I pay you in cash and take away this book with me. Hence, make sure this is available.
Will see you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Rehana.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
Dear Mr.John, My name is Rehana, your veteran custo...
^^^^
Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a lot and gained elaborated knowledge. As we speak the same language he told me t...
^^
Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'read'.
Suggestion: read
...ed by me too. That is why I am eager to read this book. I want to buy this in pers...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30733944954 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35503443491 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6928451096 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363438477653 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132036388245 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704482083824 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241655053355 0.12726935374 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453734206473 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
Dear Mr.John, My name is Rehana, your veteran custo...
^^^^
Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a lot and gained elaborated knowledge. As we speak the same language he told me t...
^^
Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'read'.
Suggestion: read
...ed by me too. That is why I am eager to read this book. I want to buy this in pers...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30733944954 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35503443491 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6928451096 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363438477653 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132036388245 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704482083824 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241655053355 0.12726935374 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453734206473 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.