Young people are often influenced by their peers. Do the advantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages?
Motivating someone in right direction is one of the best feelings in the world. Young generation would like to get inspired by their colleague. While you get such motivation, you do your best to achieve unbelievable success. So, there are abundant merits which outweigh to demerits. In the following essay I will elaborate more with suitable illustrations.
First and foremost, the prominent benefit is getting unexpected achievement. If adolescents follow their competitors, they try to perform at their level best. Even some times teenager thinks out of the box. Due to this, they learn new skill which becomes much beneficial in their future. For example, my one of the close-nit friends always trying to get good number than our classroom topper. And she was almost near to her even though being average pupil. Secondly, youth adopt hard working skill from their influencer. Unless they do not get right direction, they do not try to learn something useful and fruitful. Lastly, young generation not only learn to focus on their objective but also concentrate on their ability to do things possible. They put their exert effort. Thus, having positive influence is must.
On the contrary, now I will give you brief about disadvantages. First, they cannot realize their own inner strength. Either they just follow them blindly or become a part of rat race. Neither they focus on their weakness nor strength. For instance, one survey declared that 80% youth only do as their peers do. Moreover, sometimes they limit their own ability to achieve something extra ordinary, which is achievable by them. Hence, getting inspiration with mates is frivolous.
In conclusion, although influence by their peers having few pros, it is more fruitful. But, of course it should be in a healthy environment. Unknowingly you make your dream come true.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, even so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68136573824 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653333333333 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8172894583 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.3461538462 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5384615385 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.11538461538 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199863481492 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501549471394 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623651669279 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120292391149 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198264325698 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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