Write a letter to the college accommodation officer asking him to change your room.
In your letter write-
the problems you are facing.
What you want them to change.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my grievances with regard to my accommodation and its poor living conditions.
I am a first-year student from the Arts department and have been an occupant at the girls' hostels since the past 3 months. I would like to bring to your notice the inconvenience caused due to unsatisfactory services of the college housing facilities.
Frequent power cuts have made it difficult to work on computers, especially with assignment submissions to for next week. Moreover, it has become increasing claustrophobic, to work in a dark, humid environment. Additionally, poor hygiene of the toilet area and the common corridor is always stinking and this odor follows unto my room.
Furthermore, my roommate prefers studying late night and is habituated to reading aloud. This again is a hindrance in my sleep schedule. Lack of rest and proper sleep often leaves me feeling exhausted.
I expect you to kindly assign to me an apartment at the building across the road. I am struggling with my daily routine and find these extenuating circumstances extremely stressful. I hope you understand the emergency of the situation and do the needful at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Kathy
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18592964824 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13045564279 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683417085427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.381032978 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3846153846 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115242161054 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363847945274 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456162047304 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522487524562 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044526814398 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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