Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The human race is at the epitome of its progressive contributions made to the field of medicine. Countries should have a free health service for its citizens, even if this means that the expensive treatments are not inclusive. However, this is debatable and has a number of deciding factors accountable for many developed and developing nations.
Developing countries face a number of vices such as poverty, overpopulation, unemployment, corruption, lower standard of living, poor hygiene, thus making it nearly impossible to even provide basic health amenities. On the other hand, some developed nations are fairly contributing their bit, to the health care of the common man. Arranging medical camps, free health check-ups, regular seminars on health awareness, and even advertising necessary measures and prevention towards a certain disease is a step towards services provided for nominal costs or for free.
Ignorance of any ailment can turn to be a deadly epidemic if not addressed on time. For instance, a careless cough could turn into deadly pneumonia, which could become viral and affect a large populous. Complicated treatments such as heart transplant, or a plastic surgery may be a little difficult to provide for free, but basic right to good health is essential for every living being.
A number of initiatives taken by the World Health Organisation and other Nonprofitable organizations are constantly striving for the well being of the world. So, I certainly recommend free basic health services to be provided to the citizen of every country in the world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.332 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98585733082 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8475635959 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.181818182 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249624121298 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958988910463 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940577122338 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150856339537 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294503278004 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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