Write a letter to the manager of the transport corporation of your city, complaining about the insufficient number of local buses plying in your area in the morning time. Write the problems encountered by the residents of your locality.
Hello Sir,
I am Priyankaa, residing in Perungulathur area in Chennai. I am writing this letter to seek support for increasing public transport in my area. Our area is the hub of IT companies and international schools and we have lot of people rely on public transport to commute. Currently, we do not have sufficient transport facilities to accommodate people needs. We have bus and train facilities, which is not able to serve the need of people. Most of the school students are travelling in crowded bus, which is not safe for them. Office people are not able to go to office on time, because of the poor transport facilities in the morning time. We are having this issue since last year so people are suffering more.
I would suggest you to increase the number of bus in morning time 8 AM to 10 AM. This is peak time for office people and school students. We have can manage the crowd if we have additional bus during this peak time. We are not facing this problem in other time except 8 AM to 10 AM. Hence, I would like you to provide your support in arranging extra transport facility for our area. Looking forward for your positive reply on this regard.
Thanks,
Priyankaa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bused', 'bussed'.
Suggestion: bused; bussed
...es to accommodate people needs. We have bus and train facilities, which is not able...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59154929577 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55558670094 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530516431925 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2362446669 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8571428571 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165153831558 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571998288124 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482038951416 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134179665822 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209237020767 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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