Write a letter to your local council about a situation which created a lot of dirt on your street. In your letter
- Explain what caused it.
- How is it affecting you and your neighbors?
- Suggest how it can be solved.
Dear Sir,
My name is Sudarvizhi Durairaj and currently residing in the United Colony. I am writing this letter to bring your attention about the messy condition of our street, which creates an immense issue for the all the residents.
Let me explain the situation. I could see that for the past two weeks trashes are not collected by garbage collectors, because of this issue dirt’s become stagnant. Additionally, there are no more empty dustbins to throw the waste. It has not only created terrible smell but also spread contamination disease in the surrounding area. Even the drinking water has been vitiated and parents are more worried about the health of their children.
Even though all these problems are due to the strike of the government workers, unconditionally allowing to remain a lace untidy and filthy is not an acceptable activity.I would suggest hiring the new temporary resource for this job until the strike comes to an end. Also, to immediately solve this issue, please talk to higher officials and bring some workers from neighbor states.
I hope you will understand our concerns and will look into the matter at the earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Saibaba
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 106, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: remaining
...nment workers, unconditionally allowing to remain a lace untidy and filthy is not an acce...
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Line 6, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...nd filthy is not an acceptable activity.I would suggest hiring the new temporary ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69454851802 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.723076923077 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6715167222 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3636363636 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15124446096 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553705483979 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808241470294 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705390288621 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734276403498 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.