Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
It is true that parents hold huge responsibility and that raising children is by no means an easy task. Some people opine that there should be compulsory classes for parents to learn about rearing a child. In my opinion, I agree that these type of coaching will help first-time parents to have a smooth understanding of bringing up a child. However, I also believe that this is not vital for all the parents.
Firstly, training class about childcare to the new parent is essential. Whenever an individual who became a parent without even a basic knowledge about parenthood, attending guidance class will help to overcome the struggle to nurture their child. There are numerous couples who does not have tight support network and are nuclear families, so these types of courses may support them to reduce their anxiety regarding parenthood.Therefore, undoubtedly any parent who is oblivious to childcare will benefit from the obligatory classes about bringing up a child.
On the other hand, there are many parents who are already experienced on taking care of a child. when a parent has enough knowledge about rearing, then forcing them to attend an imperative class about child care will definitely increase their anger. Moreover,it is also waste of time for many busy parents, especially when both husband and wife are working. In addition, while a person has support from parents,then the best way to experience the raising child is to learn from elders.
To conclude, mandatory childcare courses to take care of child is an excellent idea for the first time parents who does not have family support.For the experienced and joint family parents it is not required to attend any obligatory course.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, of course, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08185053381 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8085845747 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0174595463 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0833333333 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113597504306 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535690662669 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538907589535 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818205758359 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441067395283 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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