Many people believe that the gap between rich and poor is widening nowadays because in the current economic situation the reach becomes richer while the poor become poorer What are the problems this situation may cause? what measure can be taken to solve them?
In recent times, it is a well-known factor that status of a person plays efficient role in one’s life. Every country has a wide range of wealthy and impoverished people and the fact is needy is always needy. This essay will discuss the problem and the solution for the same.
Firstly, the affluent people will lead a opulent life style,but penniless will still starve for the basic needs like food, education, employment and so on. Automatically, this will insist the poor to commit crime mistakes, which is a huge threat for the society. In addition, this will create social disparity in the society, which may result in the fight of superiority and inferiority where destitute will be treated as slaves and wealthier will be treated as god. Secondly, the gap will create enormous detrimental effect among the poor children, they will even turn to become a thief who are our future generation and the country will be forced to a pressing situation.
Foreseeing these serious threats, immediate steps should be taken by government and individuals to avoid perilous situation. To start with, government should create more opportunities for the people who earn low income. These opportunities will lead impoverished to earn more money, which may reduce the gap. Also,the society can develop and declare public appreciation programs for the rich people who contribute his prosperity in the development of poor people of the society which may help to decrease the status imbalance.
Finally, the difference between the affluent and needy cannot be removed instantly. The change should come from the individual in the rich society,in addition, government has to take some steps to avoid the extensive gap.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21299638989 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75532396225 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4609279571 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143422556634 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502682554503 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297083752395 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797856869462 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025634114276 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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