Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture What are your opinions on this

There are plethora of languages spoken in the entire world. Even states within the country, speaks diverse language. Obviously, having one language for the whole globe will be benefit. However, this could drastically affect many things, where individuals could face the inevitable challenges.
To begin with, when there is single language all over the world, its makes communication more convenient. This may give more unity feel to everyone all the around the world. When people feel everyone is same, it will bring more peace to the earth. There will not be any variance between developed, developing and under developed countries. There are chances that whole universe can have same type of currency. Also, when people visit other countries they will not face any difficulty due to any language barrier to interact with other people.

On the other hand, suddenly asking someone to speak different language, which is oblivious to them can create a great a pressure for everyone. Changing the habit which is followed from childhood is more troublesome work and all will not be able to pick up it soon. Many Customs followed by our ancestors will vanish, because of which our future generation will be oblivious about our language, customs and culture. Sometimes talking same language can make us feel bored. Moreover, privacy for each community will be lost. Already, lot of ancient languages are disappeared and current generation doesn’t even care about it.

To sum up having same language all around the world for communication is an elated decision until the customs and cultural of every community is not affected. Languages are as precious as our self esteem so we should conserve them.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the world, its makes communication more convenient. This may give more unity fee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23188405797 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58773787575 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605072463768 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3122912866 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2222222222 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185146765943 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552724056231 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309209023761 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108092332615 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259952130355 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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